Edit Your Peers

1. Washington state provided a subsidy of more than $2,000 for in-state students.

2. "The $13.5 million is the tip of a larger iceberg." coordinator of arts and culture Jerry McCollum said.

3. What I know is the system is broken right now,"President Floyd said." We can't live in a world with 14 percent tuition increases."

4. The co-presidents announced a club to meet more people who are interested in hiking.

5. "There are still new things to say with art music," said Williams. "It's is hard to stop and listen, but when you do it can be an extremely pleasant surprise."

6. In September, the wine tasting endorsement will be available in stores, according to Jane Westman, culinary coordinator for Metropolitan Market.

7. He died of a heart attack in September 1996.

8. The club has their own engineer.

9. When the cannon blasted off, it added to the emotion of the game.

Shorten the following sentences:

1. Sleep becomes less of a priority for many students.

2. A new workout routine is sweeping the country.

Does this need attribution:

1. When you tell somebody not to do something they are going to want to do it even more.
YES

2. YES

3. Organized crime has nearly all control over unions and the concrete industry in New York.
YES

4. This new trend is taking hold in many areas across the nation, especially high population areas and college campuses.
YES

5. Students do not stop and think of the consequences that might occur after a night of drinking.
YES